Monday, February 3, 2014

What strikes me as particularly Southern so far is all the language that the narrator uses to describe people. "Then a second later a little bald-headed fellow wearing a white coat which ought to have been in the week's wash…"-page 8. The narrator describes the man's coat and how it should have been in the laundry in a very Southern way, by building up to it over a long sentence. Where as someone from anywhere else might've just said;  then a second later a small bald man wearing a dirty coat… You can easily see the difference and how the sentence that is actually in the book is Southern by the way it flows compared to the other sentence. "Then the Boss spied a fellow at the far end of the soda fountain, a tall, gaunt-shanked, malarial, leather-faced side of jerked venison, wearing jean pants and a brace of mustaches hanging off the kind of face you see in photographs of General Forrest's cavalrymen…"-page 9.  That is one of the greatest descriptions of a person I have ever seen. The whole sentence just flows in this great long superfluous way that just perfectly describes the way this man looks in a one hundred percent Southern way. There is no way that someone who wasn't from the South would have even thought of using a description that long just to describe someones face.

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  1. I like how you noticed that the Robert Warren Penn uses long, drawn-out descriptions (which definitely does give the language a Southern feel) to describe things that any other person would describe in a much more brief way.

    ex. instead of saying something simple like "he put sugar cubes in his mouth and sucked them" he says "He'd pop the cube in over the barricade of his twisted black little teeth, and then you'd see the thin little mystic Irish cheeks cave in as he sucked the sugar, so that he looked like an undernourished leprechaun."

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